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The pantoum poem on this image may not be reproduced in any other manner without my permission.
Copyright © Andrea Da Costa. All rights reserved.
A pantoum consists of a series of rhymed verses in which the second and fourth lines of each verse recur as the first and third lines in the next verse. The last stanza also repeats the third line of the first stanza as its second line and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth, so the first line of the poem is also the last.
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Falling leaves 
Birds
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactAh, I love writing Critique. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt="
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This deviation is very good, for the fact that you manipulated and put together elements that match with one another to make magnificence and expression towards the beauty of Autumn.
The poem is like a confusion between fine English and something that fells like a Haiku of sorts. I didn't quite get it when explained in the description, but still, it's brilliant, whatever the odds.
The leaves on the ground and the trees in the background must've been a really hard capture, but I'll credit that one to the photographer - and all the other deviants whom had contributed to this piece.
Overall, the work is very warm to the eyes, and I think it deserves a nomination for Daily Deviation.
Stay swishy, and best regards ~