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When The Music Is Over by Pieces-Of-My-Heart When The Music Is Over by Pieces-Of-My-Heart
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:iconupdateplz: When The Music Is Over won the :iconwritten-emotion: weekly prompt contest for the week ending July 18th 2010. The prompt for the week was Lost Love.


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:heart: My thanks to the following for the wonderful stock :rose:

:iconsmoko-stock: & :iconintano-stock: background :iconlady-moriendistock: model :iconmarkopolio-stock: sheet music



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I love the way you start and end this—those four lines flow so naturally, so wonderfully, across the page and down the tongue. It’s a beautiful rhythm to begin and end with.

The text choice, however, was a bit daunting at first. It took me a couple of minutes of hit-and-miss before I was able to read the piece without messing up the words. Also, the text color, while beautiful with the background, makes the piece a bit difficult to read in the middle where the sky has lightened—the colors are almost exactly the same, making the text blend in with the background image.

I also felt, at some points in the poem, that the rhythm was being thrown off-balance. Not all of your stanzas follow the same rhythm exactly, but instead change, ever so slightly, from line to line, and that made keeping one specific pace rather difficult for me as I was reading. It feels almost like a staccato piece—whereas the first and last stanzas flow so beautifully, the rest comes out in an almost disjointed fashion.

But I LOVELOVELOVE the poem in compilation with the background image. I think you portrayed the emotions of the violin superbly, through the word choices you made as well as the darkness of the sky and background. Over all, this piece is wonderfully well-done. Excellent job!
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TheMaker64 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the poem <3
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JohnBoy756 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011
Beautiful Artwork !
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Pieces-Of-My-Heart Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
Thanks so much :-)
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JohnBoy756 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011
Your Welcome Andrea :hug:
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frenchfox Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Splendid and poetic soul ! :love:
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Pieces-Of-My-Heart Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
Oh thank you so very much :hug:
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010   General Artist
I've commented on this once before, and I still love to read this piece. It's very beautifully written and the image works wonderfully with it :)
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Pieces-Of-My-Heart Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Oh thank you so much for commenting again... it's wonderful to know that you came back again and found it enjoyable a second time plus your lovely comments about it made my day :tighthug:
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010   General Artist
you're welcome :huggle: I'm glad you like them :D
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TheRedRidingHood Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, featured in Marvelousmanips is NOW a Supergroup news article.
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